[tristan]

far from done..suppose to be a coloring exercise.. give me some tips if you have any.

[gigatron]

Lets see, i like the pose pretty cool. Hmm the first thing i see is the face needs some work and the left arm is HUGE lol. Keep working on face a bit and hair, the head usually gives the image a more complete feel (just my opinion) then I'll reply again Oh and dont forget the huge arm hehe. Fix the right shoe (i know its cartoony but just for the hell of it dont make it so weirdly pointy :P) The breast package heh it looks a bit too flat... What else? The left leg seems a bit too big dunno

[ June 27, 2002: Message edited by: gigatron ]

[tristan]

thanks Gig..haha. yeah i noticed that the arm was way huge.. birth defect, hehe. i think the left leg will look proportioned if i can show that her right is bending more at the knees. ill fix the shoe too.