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apiro
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Location: washington
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 Posted: Mon Jun 24, 2002 12:18 am |
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working on this as a pic trade. i sketched it out and worked out this lineart in adobe illustrator. still a beginner with that program though. does anyone know how to make it so that it doesn't automatically round off edges? bleh.
anyway! just wondering if you have any crits on the proportions/anatomy/lineart/whatever.. always nice to get a second opinion on these things..
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Basement bound
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Location: Calgary.ab.ca
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| Posted: Mon Jun 24, 2002 10:54 am |
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Apiro illustrator is challanging progrom, kudos.
I can see a few things that need tweeking. The center line in the blade is squiggy. The perspective of the blad to the handle is off. The upper torso looks very boyish and not that of a man. If it is to be a man the chest has to be fuller, the shoulders broader. I think the head looks a like it is postioned a little too far back. He helmet is well done, though the fin looks squashed.
Looking forward to see it completed.
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