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Lunatique
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 Posted: Wed Jun 05, 2002 7:01 am |
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Just started to block in the general atmosphere. FAR from being finished, but justed wanted to get some feedback.
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Wed Jun 05, 2002 7:11 am |
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relaly reminds me of that scene in the newer version of Romeo and Juliet.
I think the figures are really long.. they almost look like they're about 7 feet tall. but if thats on purpose, thats cool too. This seems to be outside of your normal painting stuff... its kinda cool.. Im looking forward to seeing where this goes. |
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Dr. Bang
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| Posted: Wed Jun 05, 2002 7:14 am |
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Hey luna, here's my repaint. I think you need to have some more variety of color in your paint, right now, its quite stereochrome (only blue and yellow). Plus, i think the scene would look better if it was darker.
Here's my repaint if you dont mind lover
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Lunatique
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| Posted: Wed Jun 05, 2002 7:33 am |
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Hehe, Bang, looks like you just did the next step for my painting. 
That was exactly what I was going to do for the next step--fill in all the darkest shadows. Right now, there aren't any dark shadows at all. |
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mythwarden
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| Posted: Wed Jun 05, 2002 7:46 am |
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Very nice, Luna. 
My wife would like that one. I'll have to show her when you complete it.
I never got to see your finished wolf one with the girl. That was probably my favorite of yours so far.
Nice paint over Bang.
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Sukhoi
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| Posted: Wed Jun 05, 2002 7:48 am |
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Great composition!
Althoug a bit on the soft side for my taste, I know this will be well-rendered.
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Drift Kid Runner
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| Posted: Thu Jun 06, 2002 7:06 am |
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Good job, although the only problem I really see is his neck. It looks like he has an invisible weight hanging it down or something. Other than that, good job.
Mike |
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igneus
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| Posted: Sat Jun 08, 2002 11:31 pm |
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| It's beautiful! I love it! |
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Anthony
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| Posted: Sun Jun 09, 2002 9:11 am |
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| Looks pretty good. Composition could be stronger - the focal points aren't situated on interesting lines really, and the color is obviously temporary, but I think its a nice start! |
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J-D Leon
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| Posted: Sun Jun 09, 2002 12:58 pm |
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very niceeeeeeeeeeee...
romantic..
more detail on the girl's face pleaseeeeeeeeeee
keep up the good work |
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gLitterbug
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| Posted: Sun Jun 09, 2002 2:56 pm |
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Sweeet, I like it. I especially love the curtain, the orange-yellow color I love His clothing with the folds is great and she is a hot girl :P
Keep on paintin�, so that we see it finished soon |
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Lee Yiankun
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| Posted: Mon Jun 10, 2002 10:14 am |
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Hope he doesn't slip :P
No, really! nice work, please finish it quick |
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