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jr
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 06, 2002 5:00 pm     Reply with quote
grrrrrrrrr, hulk smash!
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Thuduil
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 09, 2002 8:23 pm     Reply with quote
hey it looks good!
the only problem i have with it is shadow and lighting. I think you need alot more contrast between the colours, cuz they look too diluted. Also more detail on whatever hes smashing would just uplift the whole work. And one more thing, the background needs to be sharper, the details are blurred and look rushed. But other than that keep up the good work!
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 09, 2002 8:41 pm     Reply with quote
The background is imo fine, it should be blurred (perhaps more) and the hulkman and whatever his bashing sharper. I think the bckgraound is a photo aswell, no? Otherwise, nice work!

Other than that, I agree with Thudil. More contrast, make it clearer what exactly his bashing the crap off. Is it a (very small) tank? Either way if it isn't something that was living a second before you snapped this image, I would recommend getting rid of the fat red streak and blobs on the right of the smash. At first look I thought he smashed someones head (Or maybe he did?). The head looks just a tad bit misplace or such. try moving it slightly to the right or perhaps flip it horizontally. Are the white streaks on his body what used to be a shirt? If that's the case create more fabric, it looks like they're down to the last thread.

I gave alot of critic, but I really do like the image (otherwise I wouldn't have bothered).
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