[a_sh]

This is a pic that i've been working on on and off for the last couple of weeks...

I feel like i've reached something that is kind of finished, but i'm still not pleased with how it looks. I've stared at it so much i'm 'blind' to it though
So if some of you guys could give some hints as to what it's weak parts are i'd be very happy

I think it's biggest flaw is composition (it's very flat, and uninteresting with just one dark shape in the middle), and a somewhat goofy anatomy. Can't seem to find what's messed up about the anatomy though... it just doesn't look right

so, go ahead and fire away the crits!

oh, and one more thing... i don't like that she is nude, but all my attempts at clothes has failed miserably. any suggestions here would be nice. (that's why she doesn't have any nipples)



thx!

[BloodStone]

That looks a lot like a Poser 4 library pose for some reason.

I like the color scheme. It's heavenly. Don't be afriad to add nipples, although that does deduct from the innocence of the picture.

[ June 03, 2002: Message edited by: BloodStone ]

[Drift Kid Runner]

The problem with the anatomy would be her right arm, and her right leg. her arm is too long, if you were to squish it together a little, it would look better. Her leg seems to be facing forward, yet her foot almost totally to the right. Good colour scheme, I think if you fix those things, then it would look very good.

Mike

[Iron Spider]

You also might want to bring somr darker values into the background. Not universally, but in some of the more busy areas to give it less of a static feel. Great work though!

[zak]

all i wanted to add to this is that the forehead is waaaay topo high up, looks like shes getting a bald patch. but i like the colour scheme very very much. it gives nthe image very fluffy, but keeping the image really tight