[Germ01]

This is my concept for the Eatpoo contest. I'm in the process right now, drawing her arm so that its touching the beasts head in a compassionate way, just to give it a little more dynamicness to the piece. I will also be adding clouds in the background once I get to the coloring stage. Anyways I would appreciate any input you might have. Thanks!

[Light]

Looks pretty good.

Check the proportions of head (remember eyes are 1/2 way down).

Try to draw features of face on an arc that sweeps in insead of on a jutting out line.

Rememeber to draw the far breast smaller. Check the shape against reference. Check the perspective.

This is really quite good. You've made some anatomy problems but this can be learned.

[Asurfael]

Looks pretty good. You should try to do something about the breasts (check the loomis project female tutorial for example). The head seems too big... But i really like it, keep it up.

[Light]

I've taken the liberty to mess with your picture a bit. I'm not sure if I like the way I changed the beast and things. I did this really fast.

But notice the blue lines over the head. This indicates how the head should be. Eyes 1/2 way down and ear 1/2 way at width of head, line arcing in.

I also made a quick render in poser to show something close to the angle you tried to draw.

These are just some things I thought would help me to think about this picture. If you can use them feel free!

[Germ01]

Hey thanks for the great crits guys and the draw over (I like the model Light)! I think I'm going to rework the maiden completely and use that 3D model for reference I will post the updates as soon as I can. Thanks again!