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brev87
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Location: NYC
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 Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 5:37 am |
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Whats up. First time posting here, first time posting sketches of any kind. This sketch is far from over. I wouldnt mind some feedback on how to improve this......Dont worry I have thick skin, so all are welcomed to be honest.
[ April 21, 2002: Message edited by: brev87 ]
[ April 21, 2002: Message edited by: brev87 ] |
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Basement bound
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Location: Calgary.ab.ca
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 4:42 pm |
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AP[ol]LO's right about the anatomy, interesting concept and I like the shading you have done.
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saladbowl
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Location: PA, USA
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 11:35 pm |
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Uhm...yeah...Since I know how frustrating it is to get no feedback : here are my 2 cents.
Work on the anatomy!
The head seems to long and skinny (for a human) and his chin sticks out a lil bit to far for my taste.
Check out loomis for anatomic reference.
The hand also doesn't look right which I think got to do with the perspective that is not really clear in the picture.
I like the idea itsself a lot!
Keep working on it!
As I said...I'm not a good artist and just try to help...  |
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