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Per Bj�rsmo
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2002 10:44 pm     Reply with quote
My second attempt to paint in photoshop. Inspired from the movie Lord of The Rings.
Dont mind the hair too much. It's kind of hard to draw hair with a regular mouse.The Elf
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Per Bj�rsmo
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 12:56 am     Reply with quote
The image size is kind of big. I forgot to resize it. Sorry!
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Vesper
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 7:18 am     Reply with quote
Amazing... I get so frustrated when using a mouse; I really can't wait to get one of those wacom tablets.

My only crit is that the chin seems sunken in.

The stitching and the hair pin are great touches... Keep up the good work.
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Tabun
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 10:04 am     Reply with quote
nice stuff.

the eye could be less wide tho (it looks like the eye (esp. the iris) is seen from the front, with only the left half visible).

also, overlapping the ear over the hairpin would add some depth ;]

keep it comin'
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Kaete
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 10:23 am     Reply with quote
Elves are so yummy. Mrow. I'm a mouse-user too, so I feel your pain.

My feet do the walkin', but my pics do the talkin'!



Disclaimer: These are just my opinion, yadda yadda yadda.
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Per Bj�rsmo
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 11:40 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the help and critics. I'm kind of a newbie so i need the help i can get. Especially thanks to u kaete for your guide to improve my pic.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 09, 2002 6:50 am     Reply with quote
Hey man, I have like zero free time, but I did a really disgusting paintover for you to try and illustrate the points I'm too busy to make. Mainly, play with your values more. Don't be scared of highlights and shadows. I only touched the face, and not the hair or garment. I think you also might want to look at some pictures of people with long hair to get a sense of how it acts around the ear/neck. Anyway, don't kill me:



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Per Bj�rsmo
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 10, 2002 2:09 am     Reply with quote
does anyone know a place i can find good hair tutorials?
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