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[666]Flat
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Guy-Incognito
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| Posted: Tue Apr 02, 2002 1:19 pm |
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I don't think there is any way to comment on this picture without insulting you. Sorry.
I might look at it again tomorrow. |
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[666]Flat
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| Posted: Tue Apr 02, 2002 2:39 pm |
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| do what you have to do, but plz don't be shy. and keep in mind, the inked version will look alot cleaner. |
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Guy-Incognito
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 6:41 am |
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Ok. Here it goes.
The first impression I got when seeing your 'slut' was that she could be a hybrid of many other animals.
She has monkey legs. I think this problem begins with her fat thighs.
She has rodent-like hands - study you own when drawing hands.
I guess the third creature is an ugly human - can't be solved.
Try to make your lines flow as smooth as you can. At the mo' they look jagged (mostly around her torso). Fatten her waist up slightly and bring her right shoulder (the distant one) down.
I (personally) don't like her face at all. But you might have fixed that in the ink version. If you don't mind, I would like to try a paint over and post it later? |
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po.ck.ket
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 11:38 am |
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flat...start using reference. Buy a playboy or maxim and use real women as an aid for yourself...no more of these abominations.
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Guy-Incognito
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 1:45 pm |
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I completely agree with po.ck.ket. That way we wont have any more hybrids.
Here's my paint over anyway. Hope it helps.
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roundeye
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 2:35 pm |
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quote:
Originally posted by po.ck.ket:
Buy a playboy or maxim
buy an archie comic. |
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SWANYDSPIN
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 6:30 pm |
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| Is that your girl friend Flat? if it is, she goes alright. |
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