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DeathLoad
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 Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2002 5:53 am |
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Hey all I'm new to the forums,
hope to learn a lot of new things here and
improve so thats why I'm asking you to CnC
on my coloring.
I'd like to thank Dan for drawing the pic.
Line art:
Colored:
Rip it to peaces...
[ March 15, 2002: Message edited by: DeathLoad ] |
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]_onewolf
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| Posted: Sat Mar 16, 2002 5:43 pm |
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| i'd have to say more contrasting colours...the colours are too soft...try something more deep i colour + shadows |
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Presto Change O
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| Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2002 8:19 pm |
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| yeah, contrast, definitely need more contrast, yeah...im a good driver... whos on first? whats on second?... contrast, yeah, definitely contrast |
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Ridley
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| Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2002 2:06 pm |
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Ahhh! Deathload! Wow, good to see someone else from the bfp forums is here. Oh, by the way, nice CG  . |
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raptor_dss
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| Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2002 11:45 am |
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Just stopping in to say high to deathload and bump this up because he only got one real reply...
I think its a great cg but im not good enough to give any help |
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DarkVVulf
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| Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2002 11:50 am |
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I'm no physics major when it comes to summoning balls of pure energy and beaming them from your hand...
but shouldn't his bandana, hair, and belt garment thing be blowing away from the blast? |
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Beowulfthefallen
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| Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2002 1:58 pm |
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Err, VVulf, he didn't do the lineart, only the coloring  . |
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dizzypope
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| Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2002 10:48 pm |
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People have been commenting on
the contrast but I think if you make the
background darker it would really help
the charactor, and maybe a TOUCH
of contrast to the charator. |
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