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Spin Effect · junior member Member # Joined: 27 Mar 2002 Posts: 7

New to this board and site. Please critque!

dARCKLOWN · Posted: Wed Mar 27, 2002 5:26 am

Hey ncie work work man.
For a tip mabye for more dramatic effect mabye spread his legs out a bit more and define a light source but putting in some shadows that would look very cool.

dizzypope · Posted: Wed Mar 27, 2002 10:11 am

cant see picture.

Spin Effect · junior member Member # Joined: 27 Mar 2002 Posts: 7

Hmm cant see the pict? Maybe this will help:
Evil orc

kad · Posted: Thu Mar 28, 2002 8:19 am

nice lines.. do you plan on coloring it?

Spin Effect · junior member Member # Joined: 27 Mar 2002 Posts: 7

I would color it but i'm not very good with photoshop. So it may not turn out good, thats why i'm here though.

If you want to color it then have a shot, I can send you the lineart in the email.

henrik · Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2002 6:55 am

Cool pic. I do have some comments. I think you shuld try to draw lines more carefully, don't overdo them. Draw where needed to define forms, but not texture. Also, keep them thin as you always can increase thickness, but not the other way around.

I'm not good at coloring lineart, but I did a coloring anyway. Maybe you like the colors and you can draw your own version of it.

Keep up the good work!
Here's the pic:

Spin Effect · junior member Member # Joined: 27 Mar 2002 Posts: 7

Cool CG job. I'll keep that in mind about my lineart. Ive been practicing keeping my pre-drawings cleaner, it makes everything go easier that way.Thanks for the help.