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DarkVVulf
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 20, 2002 8:24 pm     Reply with quote
Got bored so I spewed this out, unfortunately after awhile I jus smacked into a dead end and I don't really feel finished with it.

Suggestions and all that jazz would help much.
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Sukhoi
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 21, 2002 3:28 am     Reply with quote
Pretty intense!!
You've got the insanity showing in his eyes for shure!

The only major problem I see is that you only use one colour (the face for instance). And then shade and light it using only black and white. Reality is a lot more varied colourwise. Try using some reddish, green and bluish tones in the skin, it would make it come alive, I think.

Good job!

Who's the girl?

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DarkVVulf
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 21, 2002 11:59 am     Reply with quote
Hmm, I always have a hard time using color highlights and mixtures, but it's worth a shot. I agree that it could likely use some more color.

Technically (from the movie), that's not a girl, it's a milk despenser. heh.
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 21, 2002 6:18 pm     Reply with quote
Looks sweet! It really has a lot going for it.
I think you should go in with a more hard edged brush to resolve some of the softparts. It'd also give the image more of an impact.
Looks great man!
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Sukhoi
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 3:07 am     Reply with quote
Oh, a milk dispenser....haven't seen the movie for quite a while, hehe.

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DarkVVulf
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 1:00 pm     Reply with quote


I tried with an actual background.
I like it, but the girl really looks out of place with it.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 2:59 pm     Reply with quote
i really like the second image. the background is much more interesting, just needs a bit more definition i think. alex and his droogs...heheh a little bit of ultra violence?
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 23, 2002 4:18 am     Reply with quote
I love this movie -- you do an excellent job capturing the dementia of the scene there in the second one. Would love to see him swinging the ceramic "piece" at that woman (or was she attacking him with it?). Classic movie.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 23, 2002 7:07 pm     Reply with quote
hehe

Alex attacked the woman with it, I'll never really forget that because he smashes her in the mouth with it.
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