[gent]

Lineart by PoekiPelzball (nice name, uh?)
Color by me
Very fast colored, but I somehow like it.
Anyway I don't think it's cool enough for the Presentation Forum. Would be cool if you could give some C&C.
You also can do your own version of it, I can post the lineart as soon as you say I should.
Thank you,
Gent

[jome]

Your subject line is perfect. But it's well done though. Maybe reconsider the torso. Try to curl your back in the same way, and I think you'll feel what I mean. Ouch.

[gent]

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Originally posted by jome:
Your subject line is perfect. But it's well done though. Maybe reconsider the torso. Try to curl your back in the same way, and I think you'll feel what I mean. Ouch.

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Originally posted by gent:
Lineart by PoekiPelzball ...

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[ March 09, 2002: Message edited by: gent ]

[Tk0n]

oha, der gent...
bring ja die restlichen potler nicht auch mit hier her!

c&c: you could clean up the lineart a bit more. looks a bit rough. i think, there should be a better overall lighting.
the light and dark areas arent right.

lighten the wings a bit where they cover the hair. maybe add a mesh into it (like insect-wings have).
and more details please.

i like your doggiestyle-fairy

[gent]

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Originally posted by Tk0n:
oha, der gent...
bring ja die restlichen potler nicht auch mit hier her!

c&c: you could clean up the lineart a bit more. looks a bit rough. i think, there should be a better overall lighting.
the light and dark areas arent right.

lighten the wings a bit where they cover the hair. maybe add a mesh into it (like insect-wings have).
and more details please.

i like your doggiestyle-fairy

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Hey, ich bin auch ein toller OTler Und die andren hier? Nein danke.

Anyway, the doggiestyle fairy still ist done by Poeki.
And I was simply too lazy to overpaint the linework as poeki scanned it that bad.
I will search a few textures and redo it, with more contrast and saturation to give it a more comic-like feeling. And Poeki told me to lighten the wings-about-hair-places, too.

Nice english btw ...

[robust]

Hmm , I'd say that the first pic was 1000 times better than the other coloring.

(Don't have any tips how you could do it better cause if a lame no-talen wannabie newbie )

[gent]

Redid it... still not really good, but... better?