[Didalus]

Pls help wint this sketch. What to remove? what to add?
any ideas?

[jome]

Can't comment a lot on this one. Looks like you're the advocate of the relief suicide brings... It's a find, but nothing more than that. And it looks like you only put five minutes in the sketch. Posting it in the "Finished Works" section shouldn't be done then.
My tips, if you're going to work on this, is to find the details of the weapon. And I also think that a cartoonstyle shouldn't be blown up too big, because the cartoon-line often loses its strength when doing that.

Keep on drawing!

[antx]

I don�t really get what the tank is doing there. If it would be a sports car then I would at least assume the meaning in there. But a tank? Well, maybe is a very subjective pic...

[Didalus]

Imean. that he free hus mind from all bad stuff: war (tank) sex & money

[Christian +]

The expression on the face is great. Now like Jome said, try to work on the details and render the gun as nicely as possible, a gun draws the attention a lot. get some reference images, maybe you'll engrave the gun's name, with the reflections and the right colors it would be just fine.
Now don't forget to add the empty shell **not the projectile that goes through the guys head** (the one filled with powder and carrying the bullet) that goes out of the gun when you shoot, with the smoke coming out of it, the back part of the gun should be pushed to the rear, letting the empty shell go out. The rear part of a gun goes back and forth every time you fire a shot. So it doesn�t stay that way, but you�ll draw it this way because the image is frozen.
For the colors, I'd suggest you put some reds for the background.

Good luck!

[Didalus]

first try ro color in Painter..
eh.. what do u say?

[Didalus]

new

[Torstein Nordstrand]

This is certainly coming along quite well! The face is a bit formless though, I think it's time to rip the mirror from the bathroom and study your own face. You don't even have to pay for the model.

And, like someone else mentioned above, you really should put in a background colour much earlier, it makes it easier to choose the right colours in the objects too. Good work!