[BASTION]

This is my second attempt at digital painting, I got heaps of useful crits from here with my first one and was hoping to get some guidance again with this pic.

here is what I have so far...


and here is my initial sketch...


She is supposed to be a race that is a mix between human/feline and simian, so don't stress aboutht he huge padded hands or catlike ears etc. I sort of think it is too muddy, but don't know how to fix that problem.

Any advice from you guys would be great

[jabber]

great idea. i think your light source is a bit off. seems to come from multiple directions.

for me, i think would have tried a different pose, and got her centered on the paper. but you may have ideas for that.