[jr]

hi there. this is what i have so far...the full image has a background and another dude. well, when i'm done i'll show you. but what do you think so far?
btw, this is for don seegmiller's contest.

[burn0ut]

looking very nice there jr!
no critiques from me

[Rhomb]

Really nice work. Anatomy looks good, but I would maybe lengthen the forearm a little. It would also help to separate him more from the background... now the image lacks some depth. Also considering his revealing pose and overall plausibility of the image I think you should add something between his legs .

Ville

[ February 11, 2002: Message edited by: Rhomb ]

[Bilbo]

looks great! the color scheme works extremely well imo. the only thing bothering me is that the figure blends into the background too much.. perhaps add a stronger backlight to the figure, or try desaturating the bg a bit.
as for anatomy- i think his right foot seems larger than the other one, and his hand is lacking a wrist.

[jr]

thanks for the comments fellas, i'll have to fix the colors, but i'm going to keep the drawing as is, i intended it make him look alittle more cartoonie, most of my work is pretty realistic, i want to keep this one different.