[Kuren]

I just updated her...though there's something missing. At first it was the flow of Cube (the girl) conflicting with the bg. The directions were counteracting each other, but I believe I fixed it by eccentuating the fact that she is indeed stopping via the sparks, the skid dust, etc.

I was considering of making the "graffiti" on the top right more like real graffiti, but then there's nothing in the bottom left to balance out the pic...and I'm a lil worried about that.

What does everybody think of those sparks? Not too lame? I think I need more motion to them though...

Crits and comments welcome.

[razzak]

i thnk that theres too many sparks, put a little less on one of the rollerblades. i like the picture alot thou, interesting idea and nice colours

[razzak]

ps. reminds me of jet set radio ^__^

[dontfallin]

I think the sparks were a great idea, they make the foreshotening even better, I would leave them the way they are.

[Kuren]

razzak - She IS from JGR. lol. That's Cube.

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