[gArGOyLe^]

This is incomplete.. Dont you think that the guys forearm looks weird.. also I think that he looks kinda uncompatible or something with the BG... c&cs? please

[ February 08, 2002: Message edited by: thenetbox ]

[el scoono]

i think this is looking very promising. the background is already working nicely in terms of the composition. maybe the guy in the foreground could be slightly closer/larger? that way you would have a nicer contrast in size between the two characters and create a little more depth and drama in the picture. i'm interested to see where you go from here.

[el scoono]

oh wait... one more thing. i think the trees and sky could tightened up just a bit more before you're done with background. but i guess that could depend on how tightly you decide to paint the two characters.

[snarf]

Don't forget to define your form with some hard edges. I realize you want a somewhat fuzzy look to your snow, but even snow has mass. Use colour to seperate the planes with a slightly harder edge. As it stands, I feel like I'm looking at a snowy picture that is out of focus.

I like the atmosphere a lot, especially the blues you applied to your trees. Lots of potential here!

[snarf]

I took the liberty of doing a really quick paintover to (hopefully) illustrate what I was trying to say. I hope you don't mind... don't kill me.

[Borstj]

I think it would be cooler if the sniper and runner changed places

[gArGOyLe^]

Hey.. thanks for the Paintover.. I did that kind of paintover on the new version.. Thanks it looks better now..

Borstj: yea ur right.. it would make a more interesting scene if they switched places..