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Drawnblud
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 Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2002 10:08 am |
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I posted this a few weeks ago (the sketch version) and people kept telling me the pose was off. It is supposed to look like she is taking a step. I went back and tried and tried and TRIED to fix it, but failed. Anyway, other than the pose, how does it look?
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Vesper
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2002 10:16 am |
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| I really like your pic, but I think you should move the back leg so that it supports the figure. Also, I think the highlight on the left (the arm) needs to be downplayed if the main lightsource is coming from the back. |
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Ogereye
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| Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2002 4:54 am |
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the pose isnt good... because if she stand so she would fall to the front...
and her tits are to high |
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DragomanJK
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| Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2002 5:45 pm |
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The hair and the fabrics look awesome.
The swords don't look like they are going straight, maybe it is an eye trick? The blue color is cool and the light through the holes is real cool touch.
Very nice. -falls over- |
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