[Kuren]

I'm still working on this naturally...and I'm having problems with the leg on the right (her left leg). It looks a lot shorter compared to her right leg, and it's mainly due to how the thigh is colored; the perspective is off. Right now it looks flat and I think it's due to her knee; I colored it wrong. Advice?



[ February 06, 2002: Message edited by: Kuren ]

[palladia mors]

[ February 06, 2002: Message edited by: palladia mors ]

[Andrew Crocker]

the coloring looks good except for that...it looks like her closer leg is further away....hmmmm

[Strawberrysauce]

i think that having the two skates exactly the same (in appearence) on either side is having a wierd effect on the viewers perception of perspective with regard to the legs.

i maybe try making the inside of the skate up of slightly different shapes, or in some way show a difference between the two, maybe a logo on the outside of the nearest one?


EDIT: forgot to say i really like the image so far, nice'n'dynamic!

[ February 07, 2002: Message edited by: shamhead ]

[po9o]

try making her right leg a little thinner

[FrustratedARTist]

Well, if you measure the length between the knee and the top of the skate on both of the legs, you'll notice that they are the same. I would suggest making the left (our right) shin longer so perspective seems right.

Frustrated