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adev · Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 6:46 pm

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KenMasters · Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 7:31 pm

yeah its preety flat,
try to give it a main light source rather than an all over diffusion..
remember its the subject not the background.
she should stand out....she looks like shes showing herslef off so put her in the spot light so to speak.
great for a first color attempt thow

[ January 29, 2002: Message edited by: KenMasters ]

Jucas · Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 7:33 pm

In addition. Try to shy away from dodge/burn tools, use real colors, daker shades, and use the paintbrush. Not only will you get a more interesting effect, it will make your image seem less saturated and will bring your image to the eye.
Post your next step.

adev · Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 9:05 pm

here's where I'm at so far...

dkimblad · Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2002 12:03 am

Much better! Just keep working on it and maybe get some more contrast in the shading as well as some slighty different colors on the body. Great for a first try.

Davey Newfoundland · Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2002 4:36 pm

its good to get used to using real colors instead of generating one with burn and dodge. I myself am still working on it. Its just that burn and dodge is so easy! Anyway keep using those colors and try not to use so much blacks and greys unless there is a dark background or unless the girl just walked out of a burning building.

grasshoppa · Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2002 4:45 pm

I'm a fairly new artist, but one thing i've learned is that if you use black for shadows it just makes things look dirty. Instead of black, try using a darker version of the color you are shading, i dunno, my two cents.

Great looking broad by the way.

bld · Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2002 9:09 pm

If your going to color in a comic book style, LEARN HOW TO INK FIRST DAMNIT.

You image will improve 10x. Master black and white then move to color, otherwise your going to have to reverse engineer bad habbits.