[Vive]

My first mech attempt.
I know he has many issues with him, not the least of which is his puny little head. Ah well. *chuckle*

It's a bit of a strange composition. And not at all intended to be realistic. She is in fact "floating" in front of the mech. Purely an illustration thing. Kinda like an anime poster or something.
(Between you and me... I was just trying to cover up the crotch on the mech. I cannae figure that thing out!)

Anyways. Crits would be most appreciated!



- Vive

[edit] Oh yes, and I am eventually going to give the poor mech the rest of his body. I just ran out of paper on the original sketch.

[ January 03, 2002: Message edited by: Vive ]

[gArGOyLe^]

That is veeeeeeeeerry well made.. the onlyyy thing that I noticed that looked wierd to me.. were the fingers.. but everything else is perrfect

[laslauk]

Hehe, very nice crotch cover I must say.. I can see you can handle lineart pretty well, this looks a lot better than the green lady.

[mucha]

i like the girl alot - but i dont like the mech =( - i like the mech - but i dont like him being in this pic... =/

[Vive]

Right O. Take the mech out, figure out how to draw his crotch and fix his fingers. Take the girl and give her a proper background.

Mucho thankies everyone.

- Vive

[bld]

These are nice individually, but don't work together. Perhaps if there was some interaction, perhaps have the mech hold the girl in its hand.