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Topic : "Allison the Mage....UPDATE!!!!!! Still need CRITS..." |
Drawnblud
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 Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2002 10:42 am |
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Okay, this is an update to my newest venture, I added her clothes and made the changes that people said I need.... I do still need CRITS though....
So.....?  |
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Maslak
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| Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2002 12:11 am |
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Looks nice, except for two things that bother me:
1) The book needs more detail(but i assume, that that is in the works)
2) It looks to me, from the angle of the book, that the little finger on her right hand, would have to be embedded in the book, for it to be where it is. But maybe that's just me  .
Gonna color it at some point? |
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Herr.O
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| Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2002 12:33 am |
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Good work on the dress. The details and writing(?) on it looks great! But I think you should work more on her face. The eyes are a bit slim and long, the nose could use a bit more detail at the base maybe.. but I'm not sure..
I'm waiting for the colors
[ January 21, 2002: Message edited by: Herr.O ] |
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Drawnblud
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| Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2002 12:56 am |
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Yeah, it's going to be coloured and A LOT more detailed. The face is pending, because it is for my girlfreind and I have no photos of her. Once I get some pics of her, I'm gonna clean it up a bit.
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Lomi
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| Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2002 11:44 am |
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Interesting portrayal of a mage, definately different.
I have a crit that I think her left breast (right to us) looks flat to me. |
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Akukage
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| Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2002 6:55 pm |
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| the head dress reminds me of the Benegeserate from DUNE. I rather like the slightly long eyes, adds a little mystry to the feel of the picture. ya her left boob looks flat |
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Drawnblud
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| Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2002 12:30 am |
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Yeah, I think you are right about that breast...lemme see what I can do with it (well, you know what I mean!)
Thanks Lomi and everyone! |
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