[gArGOyLe^]

Hi.. Any comments, helpful hints or suggestions before I finish coloring this beast?



[ January 17, 2002: Message edited by: thenetbox ]

[ January 17, 2002: Message edited by: thenetbox ]

[ January 18, 2002: Message edited by: thenetbox ]

[Ogereye]

where is his left ear?
the fingers and the feets are bad... i would drwa it clean :P

[HawkOne]

Hey ... it's Mister T, from the A-Team ... !!!

Definately a bit to rushed here ...

[gArGOyLe^]

Updated... fixed left arm.. and added detail to neck and chest.. more comments pleez!

[arkoh]

Woooow, is this the same artist having drawn the first sketch... ohhh you have come along way since!

The left arm is very well done... proportionally I have desided that this is your style, so let that be what it is... but the rendering of the skin with its bulging vains is pretty nice work. I would still though, maybe exagerate the shadow on the inside of his arm, well the shadows in general more than what you have done so far, so that you would get a higher contrast to where the light is reflected in the skin. I would also correct the colarbones standing out on top of his chest... they are way off base.

Maybe as a finshing comment... if this is to be the "meanest ogre ever"! Then you will HAVE to do something about his head!! He looks simply too gentle!!!... mean dark withdrawn eyes, mean teeth, larger forehead, and a lot more forward minded attitude!!!

Looking forward to the next leap in progress!!

[ January 17, 2002: Message edited by: arkoh ]

[gArGOyLe^]

Thanks Arkoh First time any one on these forums with 5 stars said wow to my work I'm following ur advice and I'm fixing the collar bones and fixing the shading.. heres the other arm.. theres some problem with the stomach area though.. :

[Qjackson]

I love the detail!

[gArGOyLe^]

thanks