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Ogereye
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 Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2002 11:05 am |
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I have made a new hero its ALPHA-BOY tadaa...
it dont look right in the perspective...how can i make him right?... and whats about the colorchange? do you like my colors? or the pose? c&c pls :9
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Drawnblud
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| Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2002 8:35 pm |
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I'm not a professional, but I have a little experience with costumes and names, so I'll see what I can do. First off all, start with the name. With a name like AlphaBoy, the Justice League of America is gonna kick his pasty, whitebread butt. Pick a name for what he does. What are his powers? Try that.
Second, lose the mask. Masks are out (except for a few notables, Batman, Green Arrow, etc.). I think the colours are pretty good though. Try not to accentuate the crotch. It looks like he is wearing hot pants or something. The pose isn't very dynamic. It looks like he is saying "Hey. You bad guys stop it. I mean it." There are no exclamation points!! Action!! Excitement!! Try looking, or I dare say, copying a pose from a comic book or something and don't stop drawing until yours looks just like the picture in the comic.
I hope that helps and don't get me wrong. I'm not making fun of your picture, just trying to help.
Good luck with Alphaboy or...um...
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PixHortHiT
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| Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2002 12:16 am |
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| I think I�ll go with Ridley on that one... |
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Daniel Chou
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| Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2002 12:27 am |
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| err sorry but I think I agree with ridely...he does look like he has an errection....arms too short, legs too short, face isn't straight, and need a bit more shading. (I aint being offensive i hope...) |
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Ridley
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| Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2002 12:52 am |
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| I'm sorry but that's one of the gayest superhoeroes I've seen. |
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NullTygre
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| Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2002 5:55 am |
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| SPANDEX MAN TO THE RESCUE! |
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lalPOOO
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| Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 11:15 am |
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| holy crap you guys are being so negative, I think that looks ok..but as the others have said you need to fix a bit, start with the uh...erection, you might want to get rid of it . also as the other person said get a better pose. O yea, another thing you could do if you really want ot keep the mask idea, is to make it green and black, like add some cool looking design on it instead of a guy with green fabric strectehd ouver hhis face. |
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Ogereye
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| Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 11:18 am |
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thx for the positive crit...
but he looks perhaps real gay, i will fix him totaly |
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