[White Rabbit]

HI!, i made this sketch few min ago, and i need some advise about proportions etc, i feel there is something wrong..., maybe i became blind but i dont see it...

[mucha]

arms are too "fat" and check the shoulders

[Davey Newfoundland]

im not an expert, but i do know how to sketch. The picture looks great but in addition to the arms the mouth is either too low on the face, or her chin is too narrow. but if your satisfied with the face, dont change it

[gArGOyLe^]

I'm not an expert either.. just wanted to say that the torso seems to be too narrow

[White Rabbit]

expert or no expert, every comment is welcome, thnx for the advise ill work on it

[SWANY]

well I'm an expert and i say the nose and mouth are a liitle to far to the left, plus what the other guys said

[Luke_de_Sade]

I'll say the neck is too thick...and I'll take an order of what the other guys said.

With fries.

[White Rabbit]

ok i updated it, and changed a few things
tell me what u think, better? worse?? or any other c&c? , ow and i dont know yet what 2 do with the background ....any ideas?

[mucha]

Much better - arms still seem a bit too "fat"
Cool pic =)

[Ecanem]

Hi..

Maybe try mirroring the picture and see if it still looks good? Proportions that are "off" is almost always revealed this way..