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cptoonz · Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2002 3:40 pm

This is a little diddy I did of Ghost. I dig Adam Hughes' style, and was going for my own take on it here. C&C welcome, thanks in advance

made a revision, please critique, thank you!

the new:

the old:

[ January 13, 2002: Message edited by: cptoonz ]

Rich Schleifer · Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2002 9:33 pm

Hey,
That looks pretty good. I like your line work. I like her face but she looks a little "too Asian" to be Ghost. No big deal with that though.
Adam Hughes is Da Man!!!!
Komikino/Richman

Dr. Bang · Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2002 9:36 pm

everything in this picture is VERY well done. Keep working on it, i will be checking back

cptoonz · Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 9:51 am

Rich,

Thank you, I must concur, Hughes is da' man...she did come out lookin' a little Asian, but its funny: a comment from another forum thought she looked kind of Italian...all in the eye of the beholder, I guess

thanks again!

Dr.

Thanks, man. Much appreciated...I'll keep you posted

peace,

cptoonz · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 4:47 pm

forgive me for performing CPR on this thread, as I made revisions to the drawing...thank you

Basement bound · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 5:32 pm

Hey, I like the old one. The simplicity of it really reflects Adam's character. The only thing I might sugest is that when the gun is pointed at us and the cape drawn across creates some depth issues. Perhaps if she has the gun pointed up in the air, could look good.

JA

cptoonz · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 6:00 pm

Basement bound,

thanks for the reply...actually, I think I might make a new pic of her pointing the pistol upward, along with her eyes looking up, et cetera, based on your suggestion. You are right though, the cloak whipping around like it does (on the old one) creates some depth issues with the foreshortening...thats why I did what I did in the revision, to keep the pistol level. Anyway, thanks!

peace,