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Ogereye junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2002 Posts: 43 Location: Ger
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 2:54 am |
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I like dinos, so i have a simple comic baby dino sketch, how do you like it, or hate it?
what can i make better...perhaps the skin to fill with structure? c&c welcome  |
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sacrelicious member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 2000 Posts: 1072 Location: Isla Vista, CA
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 3:19 am |
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I don't hate it, but I do hate the cloud filter background. Even a simple gradient would look better (but it's best to make an entirely original background). As for the dino, I think you should study dinosaur anatomy a little more. Comics take liberties with reality, but the better examples are usually strongly rooted in the real world. |
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Ogereye junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2002 Posts: 43 Location: Ger
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 3:22 am |
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hm i hate 2 search pictures in the web to see the anatomy, i need more books :/ |
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hethebar member
Member # Joined: 26 Feb 2001 Posts: 138 Location: OC.CA
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 3:26 am |
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Hey there,
had a free minute and thought I'd try to give you whatever help I could offer. I tried to give the thing more structure. I also thought that the background leg and arm were way to dark for being so near the foreground lengs. I don't think that you would lose all color and get so dark just on his other side. Added a little bit of a background too. It's always more interesting to have a setting.
/hethe |
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Ogereye junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2002 Posts: 43 Location: Ger
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 4:53 am |
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hey thanks thats really better |
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pro-phet member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2001 Posts: 130 Location: Kandel,Germany
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 5:15 am |
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hey ogereye.... are you that ogereye from warcraft.de (3rd place in the fan art contest????)
i like the dino. think its kind of stylish and very simple. and that makes it stylish in my eyes. keep on. nice to see you around here  |
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Ogereye junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2002 Posts: 43 Location: Ger
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 5:46 am |
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jo pro-phet, add me ma in icq 128982084  |
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Ogereye junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2002 Posts: 43 Location: Ger
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 6:22 am |
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so i have make the shadows like yours, so who is it?  |
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