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Ogereye
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 2:54 am     Reply with quote
I like dinos, so i have a simple comic baby dino sketch, how do you like it, or hate it?
what can i make better...perhaps the skin to fill with structure? c&c welcome
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sacrelicious
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 3:19 am     Reply with quote
I don't hate it, but I do hate the cloud filter background. Even a simple gradient would look better (but it's best to make an entirely original background). As for the dino, I think you should study dinosaur anatomy a little more. Comics take liberties with reality, but the better examples are usually strongly rooted in the real world.
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Ogereye
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 3:22 am     Reply with quote
hm i hate 2 search pictures in the web to see the anatomy, i need more books :/
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 3:26 am     Reply with quote
Hey there,
had a free minute and thought I'd try to give you whatever help I could offer. I tried to give the thing more structure. I also thought that the background leg and arm were way to dark for being so near the foreground lengs. I don't think that you would lose all color and get so dark just on his other side. Added a little bit of a background too. It's always more interesting to have a setting.



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Ogereye
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 4:53 am     Reply with quote
hey thanks thats really better
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 5:15 am     Reply with quote
hey ogereye.... are you that ogereye from warcraft.de (3rd place in the fan art contest????)

i like the dino. think its kind of stylish and very simple. and that makes it stylish in my eyes. keep on. nice to see you around here
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Ogereye
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 5:46 am     Reply with quote
jo pro-phet, add me ma in icq 128982084
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Ogereye
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 6:22 am     Reply with quote
so i have make the shadows like yours, so who is it?
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