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hethebar · Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 11:41 am

Hey all,
This is a new piece I'm working on. I figured that I'd benefit more if I actually asked the talent here for suggestions. So, what would you do to enhance this picture. Any help is great but specifically I'm keeping my eyes open for color and lighting tweaks. Thanks dudes and dudettes.

/hethe

Kinten · Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 11:47 am

Wow, realy nice blizzard

And the pose is great to! The only thing is his right arm.. It seems to be a bit to big. Flip the pic and see if you can see what I mean.
Another thing, the rifle doesn't seem to be hanging in the strap, it looks like the strap is hanging in the rifle!

I love the colors!

Keep it up!

[ January 12, 2002: Message edited by: Kinten ]

Basement bound · Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 5:36 pm

I like it alot. Some suggestions are add shadows to the snow on the rock bridge, add some snow/frost to the trees, and try dualing the colouring of the character creating more of a blizard feeling.

JA

SWANY · Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 6:05 pm

yeh the arm is way too big, in comparison with something like the head, even in that perspective, I think I know what your going for, but its still too big, the rest of the pic is sweet though.

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hethebar · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 2:59 am

Ok,
that arm is too exagerated. Mind you I like to exagerate and it throws people because I don't render abstractly but this was a little much. That gun. That floating gun. Here's the fix:

I'm touched up some details. More importantly still at this point I need to build up some more interesting color layers and dramatize the lighting a tad.
Thanks people for the crits. Keep it up!
(and thanks for the compliments

/hethe