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CavEmaN
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 09, 2002 5:23 pm     Reply with quote


Trying to go for a H.R Gieger feel but I think its lacking quite a lot. Maybe I should industrialise her face more ...

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 09, 2002 11:50 pm     Reply with quote
Or make the face more defined. I think it's a bit too blurry, so I suggest you start with that first.
The lines and paintstrokes around the head look so sharp, and the head is a bit misty. That's what hits my eye.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 4:33 pm     Reply with quote
thnx for the low down ... by misty what exactly do you mean?
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 5:14 pm     Reply with quote
Is this defined enough?
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2002 7:44 pm     Reply with quote
It looks way to flat, the shading is all over the place, think about where the light is comming from, where in Aus are you? hope that wasn't to harsh.


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PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 1:09 am     Reply with quote
Misty... I meant the same as blurry. I thought you could make the edges in the faces sharper.
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