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shrek · Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2001 7:55 am

the face still looks a bit flat...
any c&c?

original size: -big.jpg]www.planetmars.de/dust/0102_426-[122302]-big.jpg

ref-pic: -small.jpg]www.planetmars.de/dust/ref-0102_426-[122302]-small.jpg

xeNusion · Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2001 9:40 am

mehr kontraste im gesicht setzen.
fuer die haare verschiedene strichstaerken nehmen und auch hier mehr farbkontraste setzen.

[ December 23, 2001: Message edited by: xN^md ]

audacity10 · Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2001 10:33 am

Do you understand the last reply?

The girls face looks suitable to rest of her body. If you want to make it look less flat: drop a shadow from the hair resting on the side of her face. Cast a sheen around the other side. If I were you, I'd consider either lighting her pupils up or darkening the surrounding.

I really like her hair. The drawing is top notch too. good stuff.
techno-art

shrek · Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2001 11:15 am

added more contrast to her face, darkend her hair and started with the sweater...

any c&c?

-big.jpg]http://www.planetmars.de/dust/0102_426-[122602]-big.jpg (full size)

[ December 26, 2001: Message edited by: shrek ]

xeNusion · Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 5:26 am

looks far better but needs still some more improvement.
set some highlights at the face and dont forget that eyes should have a "iris" and not only a black dot.
the hair could also need some more shadowed parts as they look abit flat at the moment.
the lips are perfect.

einfach lockerer zeichnen

flipside · Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 5:45 am

Um.. I am by all means not a 'pro', but I still have some suggestions for you.. Change the background to something else than white when you work (that is, if you're not intending on having it white, but even so, it wouldn't be COMPLETELY white, it would have a cast shadow from the girl. This would maybe make the image 'stand out' more).

The sweater needs more highlights (but I guess the highlights should be subtle, diffuse, depends on the fabric). I know you're working on that, so I won't say more about that

I'm looking forward to an update!

Little Beefucker · Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 9:53 am

(Whoops -- posted, unposted, wrong forum.)

Nice pic! Her nose seems, I don't know, slightly off-center between the eyes, or maybe the eyes are shifted a bit...

[ December 27, 2001: Message edited by: Little Bee ]

NullTygre · Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 11:27 pm

the face looks flattened down from the "camera" view

shrek · Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 12:47 am

yeah, the nose should be about 15% bigger, the eyes should be slightly bigger too. same goes to the mouth. i'm just too lazy to change it.

thx for all comments

[ December 27, 2001: Message edited by: shrek ]

MarshallX · Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 10:20 pm

I would take alook at the placement of the left ear, it looks to me like it should be more visible than you have it...i agree with the nose post, its not off by much either,
(BTW, can someone rate me so I can feel cool?)

shrek · Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2001 7:01 am

well, here's an update:

[ December 30, 2001: Message edited by: shrek ]

see · Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2001 10:33 am

Hallo,

ein paar Vorschl�ge:

ganz wichtig: Die Z�hne am Besten nur wei� ohne jeden einzelnen Zahn zu zeichnen.

Du solltest auch mit dem Wischwerkzeug im Gesicht diese einzelnen "Farbfelder" verwischen. Sieht momentan etwas "fleckig" aus.
Vielleicht spielst du dich noch ein wenig mit dem Nachbelichter ( Mittelt�ne ) damit sie nicht so bla� aussieht :-)

Ansonsten tolle Arbeit!

Gru�

shrek · Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2002 7:19 am

well, i'm a bit busy atm and want to start a new pic, so this will be the last updated picture in this thread, hope you like it anyway

full size (1000x1400, 198kB): -big.jpg]]http://www.planetmars.de/dust/0102_426-[010302]-big.jpg]

if anybody here wants to finish her, grap the zipped .psd file here

(hope the link works now)

[ January 03, 2002: Message edited by: shrek ]