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dOb · junior member Member # Joined: 20 Dec 2001 Posts: 26

This work is not completed yet, but I'd like to share.

I'm working on Fatbrains. Fatbrains have tiny brains and need to cut out human brains for their living. They have to bring brain machines everywhere they go.

[ January 01, 2002: Message edited by: dOb ]

audacity10 · Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2001 4:25 am

Bloody hell, this is funny!

I like it the way it is. Not so much as a fault, but a query - is it underwater?

One other thing, there are some nice objects in the back. I think you should bring them out a bit and make the background a tad bit darker. But that’s my opinion. Do what you think is best.

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dOb · junior member Member # Joined: 20 Dec 2001 Posts: 26

Here's updated new version. Still I'm working on it...

Novacaptain · Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2002 4:20 pm

ahh...but if their brains are so small...how did they invent the brain machines?

hehe

The second one is confusing. That bloody pile of flesh and stuff is irrecognizable. It would be interesting if you could add some blood on the brainmachine too. Just to help the viewer understand that he's not just passing by. Indicate that the Fatbrain had something to do with that...that thing!

The Fatbrain's face could use more detail IMHO.

dOb · junior member Member # Joined: 20 Dec 2001 Posts: 26

You're right Nova

If they've so small brains how they invented this?

Fatbrains are part of a network. Like a beetle in our normal world (ecology). They didn't invent. They live as the way it goes. They're no clue what brainmachine is

Thank you for the crit. I'll work on it.