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Kuzya
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 Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2001 3:07 am |
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well another image i started... this one is about two gurls best friends/somewhat lovers sleeping together under the same blanket facing each other.. i started monochrome so i can get the tones worked out correctly after i'll worry about the color .. C&C welcome ..
thank you
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something about the gurl in a striped shirt arm bothers me ..but i cant seems to get it right.. well obviously it has to be lit up more , but what i am askin is the anatomic structure of it is correct?
thanks
[ December 31, 2001: Message edited by: Kuzya ] |
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Andrew Crocker
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| Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2001 3:34 pm |
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looks good, but their arms are way too thick.  |
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Kuzya
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| Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2002 9:42 pm |
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| doesnt look too tick to me.. maybe you saw that cause of the poor shadin that i had at the time.. which is fixed now.. |
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Benjamin
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| Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2002 9:24 am |
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Arm thickness is fine. These are real people, after all.
The overall image looks somewhat flat, which I could be fixed with some darker areas and/or highlights. That really depends on the effect you're aiming for. You could do alot more with the piece, or just leave it as is, really.
I like the composition, and I would like to see it finished. I believe it will be a very pleasant piece.
-Benjamin |
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