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Arpan
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 24, 2001 11:45 am     Reply with quote
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Mr. T
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 24, 2001 4:47 pm     Reply with quote
why the screenshot?

my crits would be
1) too scribbly
2) inconsistent lighting - whole scene has light from the left side, but the star on the top is lighted differently (from the right side)
3) absence of shadows
4) escher santa - his head is behind the tree, but the rest of the body is in front of the tree
5) feet

it looks a lot like a doodle to me.
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Arpan
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 2:39 pm     Reply with quote
You speak the truth Mr. T. I have ditched the project and started yet another one. Anyone, please attempt to colour it if you like, I want to learn how to colour well. I can always draw a decent picture but the colouring always goes sour.



Here is thePSD file.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 3:13 pm     Reply with quote
I started to colour it myself, this is what I have so far. This is the first time I've used my graphire for actual illustration.



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