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sweetpea
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 1:49 pm     Reply with quote
a rough sketch of arwen the elf. i'd love some critique on it so far, since it's still nice and easily-changable. thanks.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 2:09 pm     Reply with quote
the persepective of her nose seems to be off. it seems that nose is from a profile shot. I think you would see more top of the nose and the left side of it from this 3/4 pose. nice ears.
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Indian_Prophet
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 4:11 pm     Reply with quote
Nice start. I agree with Frank but at the same time, this could be cleared up in the painting stage with lighting. Did you do this from scratch on a tablet or penciled first?
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 6:58 am     Reply with quote
I agree about the nose, otherwise the line work is very nice.
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sweetpea
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 8:05 am     Reply with quote
thanks for the replies! i reworked the nose a bit, and when i looked at the old work i was suprized that i hadn't seen that sooner. silly me!

i just colored it in really quick to make sure it looks right. what do you think now? good nose? bad nose?

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sweetpea
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 8:08 am     Reply with quote
sorry, btw, it's all in painter.

p.s., how the hell do you edit posts? the process eludes me.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 8:48 am     Reply with quote
On the post you want to edit click this button and edit away.
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