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Pro · Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2001 3:27 pm

Hello-
This is my first visit to the board. I have enjoyed reading many of the topic discusions and learned a great deal. So now I would like to dive in head first and show you my first attempt at digital art. This was done from a line drawing of a cabin. No refrence was used. Any comments welcomed. By the way it is work in progress. I need to re-work the background.

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Probus · Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2001 4:20 pm

first off, i advice you to post your comments (ps on the cabin art) in one topic, but you�re new so i guess it�s a mistake.

your pic looks absolutely stunning to me. i really like the way you did the stones on the chimney. what is the original resolution of the image? i think some extra contrast in the trees and on the background, and some extra detail on the floor would add to it.

also it looks like there�s something wrong with the perspective of the chimney, it looks turned to the left too much. i could be wrong though.

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gLitterbug · Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2001 6:17 pm

Sorry, I can�t give any usefull critiques I�m affraid.
To me that picture looks pretty finished already and I absolutely love it as it is right now. That would be a painting I�d hang on my wall(and that means a LOT!) :

Sumaleth · Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 12:19 am

Great picture. Can't really see anything to suggest, it works for me.

Row.

Morbid Guy · Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 12:48 am

That's a really great picture. Very nicely done, and as a first attempt at digital art, makes it ever more impressive.

Nothing I see to crit.

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funkylizard · Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2001 1:23 pm

Great picture!! The background looks a bit washed out to me though. The textures, especially the chimney looks awesome. The cabin really stands out....brrrrr, I'm cold now

I'd be interested in knowing what program you used too and if you have a slightly higher resolution version.

Funkylizard

Speve-o-matic · Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2001 12:24 am

Wonderful. I think everything is working very very well at the moment.

What program did you use, just out of interest?

- Steve