[Alexei Samokhin]

here is the tests of male body
i need some freedback , if someone can help to fix the problems http://mex.cgnation.com/anatomy.jpg
thx

[Alexei Samokhin]

i think this will be better

[J-D Leon]

may i give some comments?
their legs seem to be a bit shorter than it should be. and hands are too long.

[Ben Barker]

I can tell you aren't thinking about the human body the right way. You seem to concentrate on the outlines. Remember, the body is a mass in space. It has sides and planes just like a collection of boxes.
Here, a sketch is worth a thousand words:


Bridgman's books are the best for capturing this way of thinking. Look at the pencil studies and charcoal sketches of master artists and it becomes clearer.
http://www.goodbrush.com/hirez_pgs/forum/forum1/canson_hand.JPG

Your figures need more depth. You need to make your lines suggest that.

[Alexei Samokhin]

Thx Ben.
I Understand , I need more mushrooms to understand the world :-))))