[Lihamyrsky]

a background is in the works. please, crits, comments, anything?



[ December 11, 2001: Message edited by: Lihamyrsky ]

[A.Buttle]

Too much RTCW for j00.[/LIST]

[Steven Stahlberg]

Helmet should be much lower?

[Indian_Prophet]

yea the brim could be fine, if you wanted to keep that part, then just chop off at the top of the helmet and then lower your back part of the helmet down to a few inches above the shoulders...
nice job so far though
peace

[Lihamyrsky]

and here it is. any better?

[Manik Monkei]

I was going to comment on the light source, but it looks like you fixed that in the revision. I don't think the buckle(?) on his shoulder strap should be so light if there's little to no light hitting it (suggested by the surrounding clothes)

It still looks very sketchy, and unless this is what you're going for, it needs a lot of refinement. (if you ARE going for sketchy, you'll need to mess up the face a little more.. it looks like more time has been spent detailing that area)

Now let's see that background

[Lihamyrsky]

*glances around*

i'll just sneak this revision in before i paint the background




*sneaks away*

[ December 10, 2001: Message edited by: Lihamyrsky ]

[Lihamyrsky]

ahh damnit, just noticed, the helmet's off perspective... that's why i couldn't get it to fit on the guy's head properly =|

thanks, update coming soon

[Lihamyrsky]

a fast background ( 2 minutes, heh )

[A.Buttle]

Is he a commie nazi, meat storm?

[Lihamyrsky]

a nazi looking at commie propaganda, although the poster is gone now.