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Author   Topic : "portrait of some girl (cnc)"
xor
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 9:36 am     Reply with quote
here is a portrait i did of some imaginary girl. i started out with a basic sketch design of the face on paper and elaborated on it from there in photoshop and a mouse. so, no ref.

a few things i already notice so far;

-yea, it's not colored...(not sure how to approach this)
-the hand isn't done
-the hair position could be chaned

and that's about it. comments n' stuff would be cool.

here it is:





-xor
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Borstj
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 9:55 am     Reply with quote
Very good tones and shading more of that please

But I don't know which look youre going for cuz now it looks like a transvestite the chinare is far to masculine, so more feminity there. if thats what youre aiming at
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Indian_Prophet
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2001 11:19 am     Reply with quote
indeed this is pretty darn good. I would agree to chop a bit off at the chin and if I were you, I would start completely over with the hair and make it as detailed as the face deserves it. good job
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