[Ragnarok]

This is a rough sketch for a xmas card I have to do for Monday. I still have to do lots of things, but I'd like to know what do you think so far and any kind of crits or paintovers you could do, because I think the sketch is the base for the final drawing.
Thanks in advance.

[Ragnarok]

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Well, I've been working on it:

[S4Sb]

Hey, you have a real neat picture there. You are improving fast!I tweaked the ear a little. It looked somehow folded back. Maybe swith your originally pic horizontally and you might see. For technical reasons I had to paint over your linework. I liked it very much tho. His glasses have a perspective problem. I somehow didn't realize that when painting.

hmm...looks like I could have explained the few faults I found in your painting with text better. Since my paintover was mainly about colours and it doesn't look like you need colour advise

Keep up the good work

[Mr. T]

the beard looks a off-center below the mouth...

[Big Pa]

great work so far. I love the line drawing. But I would add more of a background than a plain gradient. Don't get me wrong. I like it as it suggests a cold winter day. But you could add some trees or similar.

[tyron]

woah! you've improved greatly! nice to see something from you again... keep it up

[jr]

nice drawings fucktards! -is what roundeye would say.
you can't make santa clause like he's made out of rocks. you gotta soften him up into some sort of a fat, nay, hyper obeased person. in the jerry springer guest mode. get rid of those back lines if you're using this image, if not, make them more round!
keep um coming!

[Ragnarok]

I have to give this tomorrow, but I plan to work more on it, just to see where I can get, so any input is apreciated.