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CrakBEENie
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 Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 4:56 am |
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i was aiming for under 7000k, just wondering what you guys think...thanks
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Norling
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 6:27 am |
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under 7000k...would'nt be hard at all. 
The face looks really scary, but i have seen similar body-designs before and i've never liked them. |
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mox
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 8:04 am |
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Her breasts are awfully perky for a hag. A tad more sag to them would really be a lift  |
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Robert Ashley
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 8:52 am |
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Under 7000 poly is not exactly low poly. You should go ahead and add more polygons to make it more smooth (especially in the breast area)
I think everything looks great though...just need to be refined a bit. You couldnt use that in a real time game with a background anyway.
Great job, cant wait to see it texture mapped! Please post it when you finnish it.
Would also like to see more of your characters. |
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CrakBEENie
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 11:25 am |
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thanks for the suggestions..i have her at 6680k right now so i have 320k to work with...and the boobies are perky cuz i didnt want her to be completely hideous, something has to distract her enemies while she strikes  |
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Tarandon
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| Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 2:28 pm |
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Where the woman meets the spider you can sort of see a "leg sparation" try and make her stomach merge with the thorax of the spider, instead of her legs merging with the abdomen. Like in the sketch. Is that clear? I don't know!
Just a thought, Looks great |
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Little Beefucker
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| Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2001 3:15 am |
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Hells, yeah -- that head is really disturbing.
Not that I know the first thing about actually structuring 3D stuff, but if she's really an old hag -- above the abdomen, I mean, then Mox is right: she needs a boob sag. In fact, you'd probably want to make something like a gut protruding, a menopause paunch in her belly. The back could sag more towards the spider's center of gravity -- imagine this old woman sitting on her own knees, leaning back because her spine long ago stopped supporting her properly. Then translate that back into the spider... ?
Just typing out loud. |
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CrakBEENie
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| Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2001 10:54 am |
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| okay, maybe i put out false advertisement...shes not supposed to be a wretched ol bitch...i wanted to give her something nice since her face is all jacked an creepy and she has 8 legs.....just clearing that up |
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