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deranged3 · junior member Member # Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 5

hello, havent posted in a while..
been werking on a new picture since my broken wrist healed.
i know its far from finished too, and i know there is a lot of things wrong with it right now, but id like to get some feedback while im working on it

and it really doesnt look like who its supposed to look like just yet

well anyway, here it is...

thanks!!

Mr. T · Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2001 5:58 am

yea, face needs some work... everything else is good. hair is wicked!

Jenn · Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2001 8:43 am

eyes wide shut?

deranged3 · junior member Member # Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 5

thank you

yes , the face needs a ton of work

ill put up some more progress shots later..

yep, its Nicole Kidman from Eyes Wide Shut

[Shizo] · member Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938

looks like a piece of crap
it's sh*t

Freddio · Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2001 5:11 pm

looking good, yes the hair is great, I think you need to concerntrate on the shape of the face and her features..

I know how hard it is to be able to get a decent likeness..

deranged3 · junior member Member # Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 5

ok here we go, an update
i moved the eyes down, becuz that was one part that was makin it not look like her, her farehead was too short, and her nose was too long, so now thats kinda fixed...
i also fixed up the lighting/color a little more...
i just need to finish the window sill, and a bunch of other little details...
but basically its almost done

btw, if you look at the reference picture, my painting doesnt really look anything likeit

certain things are way off but i think it turned out well... i guess i just did the sketching/blocking too quickly..

anyway here it is

lemme know if you want me to post the reference image...

Jelo · Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 3:52 am

Please do.

deranged3 · junior member Member # Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 5

reference photo

Tarandon · Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 2:02 pm

I think you're right deranged, the face that you drew, is too short, compared to hers. Most specifically the forehead. It will probably be a bitch to fix considering all the work you put into the hair. Also, I think her right cheek is a bit low, try and bring it up I think that will help. If you hadn't told me it was Nicole kidman mind you, I would have said "sweet mother that's good"

Cant winem all eh?

Good work

[ November 24, 2001: Message edited by: Tarandon ]

Probus · Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2001 2:05 pm

i think that thinner eyebrows, slightly bigger eyes, more definition in the lips, lower hair, and some refinements on the ear would make it look more like her.