[Ascan]

Hi there!
I'm trying to paint night scene of some future city.
Please tell me - is there something wrong on this picture?

[Shiro_tengu]

lovely picture but the road is tipping over to the right as it turns.

[Shiro_tengu]

lovely picture but the road is tipping over to the right as it turns.

[Anthony J]

its cool
looks ok with the road tipped, maybe you could have some kind of space-bike driving towards the viewer, or maybe away ?
whatever, anyways, tip the bike along the road and voala !

[Ascan]

i not describe what i do with this pic later.
so:
- this pic will be used in flash animation
- i add a stream of some vehicles riding the road (of course they will be sci-fi, so road tripping is not important)
- i add some train that will ride the glass tube on the background
- i add some glows and lights blinking.

also i want to add more details on this picture.

but before doing all of this i must be sure that pic on this stage is good enought.

[yaa]

nice pic. very cool atmosphere.
however i do agree about the road tipping. if anything if should be tipping inwards (sort of like camber). i do see what youre saying about "sci-fi" vehicles managing on screwy roads, but it still takes away from the pic, in my optinion.

[soilborn]

this is pretty cool, the thickness of the roads median and rail change alot. but that's not important, it's in progress. =)