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Author   Topic : "Cyborg // Android // Sketch"
taff
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 1:16 pm     Reply with quote
I am quite happy with this one..

Do not worry about the shadow, it is just a sketch, yet. Think, I am going to color it.



c&c welcome.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 6:41 am     Reply with quote
i wonder why noone commenced on this. looks good, only some things seem out of proportion. i can see you don�t want it to look symmetrical on places, but something isn�t good between the right arm and the chest. also, the right arm seems to bend in a strange way, i think you should see more of the side of it, or turn the hand around. i would make the legs longer, and attach the lower leg more to the upper.
keep up the good work!
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 7:00 am     Reply with quote
you are right, I messed up a litte with the right shoulder, arm and hand! ^^

I see the probs.. hmm, darn, I'll try to fix that in the colorized version.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 10:28 am     Reply with quote
well... to tell you the truth .. the drawing is pretty good.. but get rid of that shadow.. its making your drawing look 2D. as if its like a peice of cardboard with a drawing on it in the shape of the robot...
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 2:30 pm     Reply with quote


I tried to fix some perspective problems. There are still ome in there, oh well.. won't fix those.
I know, that the shadow is kinda strange, thought it cld turn out nice, for a "sketch", because it isn't done, yet
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