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Topic : "Cyborg // Android // Sketch" |
taff member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2001 Posts: 140
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Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2001 1:16 pm |
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I am quite happy with this one..
Do not worry about the shadow, it is just a sketch, yet. Think, I am going to color it.
c&c welcome. |
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Probus member
Member # Joined: 28 Jul 2001 Posts: 179 Location: Netherlands
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 6:41 am |
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i wonder why noone commenced on this. looks good, only some things seem out of proportion. i can see you don�t want it to look symmetrical on places, but something isn�t good between the right arm and the chest. also, the right arm seems to bend in a strange way, i think you should see more of the side of it, or turn the hand around. i would make the legs longer, and attach the lower leg more to the upper.
keep up the good work! |
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taff member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2001 Posts: 140
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 7:00 am |
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you are right, I messed up a litte with the right shoulder, arm and hand! ^^
I see the probs.. hmm, darn, I'll try to fix that in the colorized version. |
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wigin member
Member # Joined: 23 Sep 2000 Posts: 408 Location: Ottawa Ontario
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 10:28 am |
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well... to tell you the truth .. the drawing is pretty good.. but get rid of that shadow.. its making your drawing look 2D. as if its like a peice of cardboard with a drawing on it in the shape of the robot... |
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Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2001 Posts: 140
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 2:30 pm |
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I tried to fix some perspective problems. There are still ome in there, oh well.. won't fix those.
I know, that the shadow is kinda strange, thought it cld turn out nice, for a "sketch", because it isn't done, yet ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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