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Mr. T
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 2:01 pm     Reply with quote
Just needed something to use as a splash screen for my website, so I decided to do a new pic... so far it's still very rough, and some parts are missing . It's been drawn from mind, no references used. here's the pic:


And this is the first (and the only) sketch I did before starting:


There are tons of perspective and colouring errors, not to mention the whole design of the goggles , but I'll try to correct it. Oh, and the ears are totally wrong, they are still in the very-rough-sketchy-what's-this? phase... Crits and comments more than welcome.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 2:06 pm     Reply with quote
believe it or not, but i like the ears. they are somehow unhuman and i think that fits in the picture very well.
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Kaete
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 5:39 pm     Reply with quote
My only quibble is the angle of the goggles. The face is looking down, but the goggles seem to point towards the sky. Otherwise, I agree with pro-phet. The ears are fantastic!
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bottrishish
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 5:52 pm     Reply with quote
You may wanna do more with the clasps. I think the ears fit in quite well too.
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hovair
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 16, 2001 8:53 pm     Reply with quote
I like it. especially the flesh tones. I think the nose is a little off center, it's too much to the right. post the finished version when your done.
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edible snowman
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 4:11 pm     Reply with quote
i think the cheekbones and the forhead could use a little work, and the goggles could be a little more 3 dimensional. great skin tones like everyone else said.
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Wild
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 5:20 pm     Reply with quote
I like the toothpick...
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Wild
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 5:23 pm     Reply with quote
Did that sound unprofessional?
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 5:38 pm     Reply with quote
looks great. very original. what program did you use for it?
no tips really, id just tighten up those belts and squeeze a little flesh out around the straps
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 7:24 pm     Reply with quote
man, for 15 years old, you are kicking some major ass. I am digging this one, something about those straps bother me though...perspective or something. Keep up the awesome work.
-Matt
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Mr. T
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 3:09 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the comments guys. I really appreciate it. As i said, *major* perspective problems. I'll post the updated version very soon.

shawn p: photoshop is the weapon of choice


cheers.
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