[Zidji]

Ok... this is probably, my first "real" artwork since I got my wacom, still under progress though.

Is there anything I should change in the anatomy before starting to color?



I know the left foot is wrong, I'll have to fix that, maybe someone has a suggestion?


/ Zidji

[Monkey Majick]

Looks good.

A man's features works in triangles and rectangles. With this in mind:

Widen the shoulders out and square them off.

Give him some pectorial muscles. Again squarer.

Broaden the forearms. Again squarer.

I hope this helps before you start to color.

[Zidji]

Thank you for the tip,
does this look better?...





I also added some more detail to the guns and I fixed the left foot.

Is there anything else that needs some more attention?


/ Zidji

[maceface]

you know i really like how solid and non-sketchy your lines are. something you dont see too often anymore.

[Jabberwocky]

I like his pants... those are cool!

[JammyB]

His left arm looks a bit off to me, if you were looking down his arm, I think it should be rotated a few degrees clockwise (hope that makes sense). Also maybe give him some muscles on his chest area (sort of like Arnie or someone). Otherwise though very good, can't wait to see it finished.