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SilentMan
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2001 7:02 am     Reply with quote
This is my second attempt of a "serious" picture in Photoshop. Any suggestions/complaints?

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Twacle
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2001 7:43 am     Reply with quote
Wooooo, i like it !

Perhaps it would look even better if there was a little more detail on the clothing and the flames.

I like the face a lot !!!
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Scott Wetterschneider
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2001 9:36 am     Reply with quote
Wow, that's a bad mofo.

Details like stitching will help. And using the background flames as a lightsource would tie the image together.

Also, his eyes might be redder from the smoke, and sweat might be running down his face,which could be more "sunburnt."

Here's a little overdraw, hope you don't mind.



[ December 01, 2001: Message edited by: Scott Wetterschneider ]
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pro-phet
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2001 12:22 am     Reply with quote
i think this is really cool. and if you do it like scott or better it'll be awesome. but one thing i mind is the "cigarette". it doesn't really fit in in the picture. it looks a kind of seperated because it is just laying there on the lip! perhaps you can do there something?!
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Shiro_tengu
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2001 3:49 am     Reply with quote
I LIKE IT!!!awesome
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TweeK
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2001 8:10 am     Reply with quote
Cool image!
I like it a lot, he could be a little bit more psycho though, and some smoke stains on his face and clothes.

Did some extra details


Ps that ain't a flamethrower but a blowtorch
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SilentMan
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 1:13 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks guys! I really appreciate your comments!
TweeK - Hm... it�s a very futuristic flamethrower? Nice added details btw.
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paltsi
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2001 1:56 pm     Reply with quote
nice work, but that helmet looks kinda flat... more 3d =)
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