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Justa Fledgling
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 Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 4:16 pm |
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Well, hope you guys like it so far. Anything wrong or off about it? Might be a little tilted but i assure you its because of the way i scanned it. ANY and ALL comments are much appreciated. 
P.S. Whats with the 2 stars? Am I that crappy?
[ November 13, 2001: Message edited by: Justa Fledgling ] |
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Justa Fledgling
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| Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 7:16 pm |
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Robert Ashley
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| Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 8:52 pm |
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It will take a few days to get a bunch of critiques for your work. Dont think of your stars, I got only two stars and I have a bach degree in animation!!!
Anyway, I think your work has great potential! There are some problems with your lighting and anatom. I can see that you have the nack for drawing though (and the want)
Keep working and posting. Read tutorials on the net. You will improve!
Good start. Keep working on it. Post as you come along! |
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Justa Fledgling
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| Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2001 11:02 pm |
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| Good advice but im way ahead of ya as far as tutorials and what not. Any tips on lighting or anatomy you can give me id take to heart. I noticed i made the biceps too long or low but thats all i noticed was wrong anatomically. His legs might be too short but if you were referring to the musculature you got me. Kinda made it up where i thought it belonged. Thanks for your comment. |
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mox
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| Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2001 4:44 am |
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Did he kill a teddybear to get that skin?=P
Sorry couldnt resist it ;-) no dis intended. |
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Justa Fledgling
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| Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2001 12:31 am |
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Saw that too huh? I know, i could have at least referenced a bear to draw somewhat realistically but at the time i wasnt really planning on completing it. Was more for concept. But by God it was the meanest teddy bear he could find. BTW i dont care how harsh comments are so long as theyre kept helpful. "You draw like a worthless piece of shit you stupid bastard!" is not helpful.
OH yea. Get me some stars.
[ November 13, 2001: Message edited by: Justa Fledgling ] |
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