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daffy
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 Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2001 3:04 am |
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[ October 19, 2001: Message edited by: daffy ] |
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GRID
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| Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2001 4:48 am |
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I think the girls nose need�s some more contour.
And the military pic need�s just alittle more color to it.
/GRID |
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xeNusion
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| Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 9:43 pm |
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| dont use airbrush with black as color to shade. it will look unrealistic. |
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comdiablo
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| Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 1:46 am |
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| I really like the soldier - very good mood you captured in the pic - love it!! |
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squirrelstars
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| Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 3:53 pm |
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| the girl in green - yeh the nose.. THE NOSE needs a bit of work to make it look like it belongs on her face. dig your colors, wish i had the patience to color like that. one day i'll post up my worthless crap, you guys better rip it apart then! |
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Loukus
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| Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2001 6:10 pm |
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nice work, love the backgrounds
Joel Loukus |
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Sean McIver
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 2:51 am |
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The eye is also a problem, I think. It seems that it is flat. This is perhaps more of a problem than the actual nose... I dunno.
Otherwise, I liiiiike!!!   |
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robust
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| Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 3:06 pm |
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IT'S BRITNEY  |
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Frost
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| Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2001 3:24 pm |
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| "bitch" ... I was expecting a dog, but no... |
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daffy
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| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 11:25 am |
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| Thank's for the crit's I'll look in to it, but it might take a while, got work, work and more work first. |
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jcFIG
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| Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 10:43 am |
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| I too feel dissappointed. I came to this post expecting a 'bitch' or female dog if you will but what do I find, A WOMAN.-A WOMAN DAMMIT! |
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Daniel R
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| Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2001 3:54 pm |
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| maybe you should work a little on her expression... she looks too calm, too serene. |
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exo
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| Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2001 10:06 am |
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I think you have to work the foreground background out on the sec pic, its not that clear. Looks a bit like toy helicopters hovering around her.
And work a bit on the girls realism. Textures and so on.
As she is in a quick motion i suggest that you blur her a bit, she looks a bit frozen in that position. (it saves time too)
//Peter |
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